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"A la Blanc"

"A la Blanc"

Photography Photography \ Figure | 03/17/08 @373 | MsMichelleLynn | Comments critiques (40) | Views views (1272)


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Two weekends ago, I came across a woman walking her Pomeranian and snapped a few photos. None were anything special but with the help of cropping, cloning, desaturation, color balance, levels adjustments, and the blur tool, I came up with this.
Below I've linked a larger version and a resize of the original RAW image.
 
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Avatar Almost-Human

 03/17/08 @388

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Avatar Andy--Jones

 03/17/08 @412

it looks like some heavenly seal pup or something! Lovely work.
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/17/08 @412

Thanks Andy
 
Avatar ThruMyEyez

 03/17/08 @425

An excellent image. You took a somewhat ordinary photo and created a unique one. Very good work!
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/17/08 @426

Thank you Gary.
 
Avatar beatrizmatar

 03/17/08 @437

Beautiful photo¡¡¡¡¡+10:)
 
Avatar moserArtist

 03/17/08 @476

A fabulous image. You took a unique photo and created a somewhat ordinary one. Very good work!

j/k LOL

Enjoy the seamless transition from the dog with its background.
Difficult exposure which you handled well.

The frame is a bit kitchy maybe... :p (or kitschy as described below although I did not add so much negative meaning to it as the definition gives it...) :p You know me better... ;)

Nice focus.

Off center possibly?
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/17/08 @484

Thanks for your critique Patrick. The seamless transition you refer to was created by the use of the blur tool in PS. Concerning the crop, I wanted this tight and I moved the dog's head as far up and right as I felt comfortable with using the mouth and nose as the focal point.. Any closer would have crowded the dog in my opinion. If I had moved him further away, there might be too much of the very nondescript background in view. The increased fur I feel is a better choice as it at least has some detail. I find the focal points to be the black and gray areas which seem off-center to me. I don't quite know what "kitchy" means. I played around with frames on this. I didn't like pure white or anything too dark.
As always, thank you for your in depth and sincere comments.

Michelle
 
Avatar Byonder

 03/17/08 @650

I think he means "kitschy." Here's the definition from dictionary.com: Sentimentality or vulgar, often pretentious bad taste, especially in the arts. The frame doesn't do anything for me, but it doesn't bother me either. I've always thought digital frames were kind of silly, but they can definitely add or distract from a piece.

I think the contrast could be bumped a bit as it appears a tad flat -- the link to the Picasa version looks better.

Crop and composition look good to me.
 
Avatar Vasco

 03/17/08 @690

Great one, again. I agree entirely with Gary.
 
Avatar everseen

 03/17/08 @773

Dreamy! 7/7
 
Avatar Roadrunner

 03/17/08 @788

Excellent work Michelle!
 
Avatar Tommyguns

 03/17/08 @945

Awesome work Michelle! +10

Tommyguns
 
Avatar Phos

 03/18/08 @022

(laughing),, Michelle, when I looked at this this morning on your gallery this photo had me a bit confused. "what is that?, I thot, it can't be an artic fox-- its not the right profile and I think they have dark eyes" I could think of nothing in the wild it could be and all this time it was a desaturated pomeranian!
really nice job and wonderful creation;)
*/9
 
Avatar workster

 03/18/08 @045

I had a similar reaction to Phos -i.e. what kind of wild arctic animal is this?
The frame is fairly low key so I don't see how it can be called kitschy.
I like it - the processing and crop work very well.
 
Avatar razpna

 03/18/08 @260

the white is great
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/18/08 @369

Thanks folks. I'm happy you enjoy this.

Phos and Don,

I guess I could understand your confusion especially in the wake of my posting history. I rarely shoot domestic animals and frequently seek out wild ones. This dog was a bit wild, however. It was jumping all around in excitement at my presence. I had difficulty in capturing a good image on that rather dark and cloudy day.
Thanks for the definition Brandon. I do agree, however, that the frame is rather neutral. I tried white and a darker gray as well but found that too much contrast would detract from the photo.

Michelle
 
Avatar Jafus

 03/18/08 @554

Excellent work michelle +10
 
Avatar ersen-t

 03/18/08 @648

good shot.
 
Avatar ARZILLIER66

 03/18/08 @659

Great composition!
agree Patrick comment a Fabulous image (B) +++10
 
Avatar HuseyinKARA

 03/18/08 @729

OMG! Very very good..

9/9
 
Avatar ITOCELL

 03/18/08 @752

the colour is great!
 
Avatar zahara

 03/18/08 @806

Beautiful composition, great shot ;)
 
Avatar blackshad

 03/18/08 @820

excellent work
could use a bit more contrast ;)
+9
 
Avatar Daykan

 03/18/08 @834

It´s beautiful!!!!!
Really beautiful!!!
 
Avatar mamoun

 03/19/08 @700

Very good work!
 
Avatar cupcake

 03/19/08 @847

Very Good idea.
:)
 
Avatar Hysteria

 03/20/08 @345

Nice Different POV. I really really like it! :)
 
Avatar ogu

 03/21/08 @481

Looks little bit scary ... Like the original one also.
 
Avatar FAV

 03/21/08 @702

top marks !!!
Florin
 
Avatar yvy

 03/24/08 @815

good composition, but i think it's overprocessed.
 
Avatar Phryneas

 03/24/08 @955

I'm looking forward to someone doing a photomanip changing this dog to "Falkor, the luckdragon" from the Neverending Story ;)

You did a really good job with postprocessing, but I have to agree that I don't like the frame.
 
Avatar djoe

 03/25/08 @100

+6
 
Avatar purplerose

 03/25/08 @576

Nice capture.

Way too flat, elites should do better. Needs more contrast because it fades in the background too much.

border doesn't work.
 
Avatar MsMichelleLynn

 03/26/08 @437

The fur edges were intentionally blended into the background by using the blur tool in Photoshop. I'll try to do better Rose so that my photos meet your elite criteria. Perhaps you could give me some pointers on how to achieve this goal rather than making such broad statements?
 
Avatar WarrenLouw

 04/06/08 @396

wow! i personally love the soft tones and contrasting. that eye really came out amazing.
 
Avatar LiddleLarsen

 05/10/08 @001

Very good capture.... I love everything about it
 
Avatar bluewaterkidd

 05/18/08 @316

You are still awesome!
 
Avatar Madanapale

 06/11/08 @139

Great capture!...beautiful whites!
Carlos
 
Avatar dullboy-d

 06/13/08 @606

Great lightning, I really like this shot and on top of that dem dog so cuute! +8/8
 
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